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Original: 8/11/2006 4:53 AM
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Friday, August 11, 2006

 THE NEW GOD IS DEAD TOO

"god is dead" she says through tears
crumpled tissue in her fingers
mascara sprints down her cheeks to the desk
where she sees this poem written in the future
knowing i'd write it
without a happy ending
every singing drop of saline intact
so yes
god is dead
he's writing about sports cars now
a magazine pays him decently
he's doing great
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wow, i feel lost.
Posted 8/12/2006 11:22 AM by reenteredservant - reply

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I like the end. That's all I can manage right now. It's too damn late.

PS: Have read comic script, and enjoyed very much. Will provide more coherent feedback when not so tipsy.
Posted 8/16/2006 10:48 PM by SingOnPaper - reply

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ya ya, enjoyed the script too!!

and i'm still trying to figure this poem out. really....

Posted 9/8/2006 3:06 PM by iamjackscupoftea - reply

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ryc: haha, no babycakes i'm still around. sometimes i just get so fed up and distraught with my life, one of my coping mechanisms is to start a clean slate, so to speak, on my xanga. therefore i periodically privatize all my entries so nothing shows up. trust me, i've been on this badboy for almost five years now...originally under a different name.
Posted 9/9/2006 2:32 PM by iamjackscupoftea - reply


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